What I Am Working On...

I am working on an outline for my research paper. I want to find out how the portal of women in video games affect teenager. Artist who design the characters create them to be as physically perfect as they can. Many teenage girls look at these virtual women and believe that this is how they have to look in order to catch someone’s attention. Teenage boys play games with these “perfect” women in them and become intoxicated with the thought that real women look like they are portrayed in video games. Thus far I have only read online journals and game magazines. I have found a lot of evidence to back up my thesis statement. One of the major problems I am facing right now is gathering all of my information and turning it into a well written essay using my outline. I’m kind of confused about where certain things should go...